1141 Essay 1: Friendship

 (Introduce the main idea of the topic by making a general statement about the topic, e.g., Friends are very important in my life., Good friends are hard to find / 透過對主題進行一般性陳述來介紹主題的主要思想，例如，朋友在我的生活中非常重要，好朋友很難找到). (Say what is relevant, interesting or important about this topic, e.g., It is important to choose your friends carefully, I can’t imagine life without friends  / 說說與這個主題相關的、有趣的或重要的內容，例如，謹慎選擇朋友很重要，我無法想像沒有朋友的生活). In my opinion, the three most important characteristics of (Topic) are (Main Point 1, e.g., honesty, / 要點 1，例如誠實), (Main Point 2), and (Main Point 3). In this essay, I will explain why each of these points are important and how they relate to (TOPIC).

One important aspect of (Topic) is (Main Point 1). This is important because (reason why Main Point 1 is important or relevant / 要點 1 重要或相關的原因) and (another reason why Main Point 1 is important or relevant / 要點 1 重要或相關的另一個原因). Because of this, people should (suggest an action that people should take because of this situation / 建議人們針對這種情況所應該採取的行動). In short, these reasons demonstrate why (Main Point 1) is an important aspect of (Topic).

Another key part of (Topic) is (Main Point 2). This is important because (reason why Main Point 2 is important or relevant to the topic / 要點 2 與主題重要或相關的原因) and (another reason why Main Point 2 is important or relevant / 要點 2 重要或相關的另一個原因). For instance, (give an example that demonstrates the importance of Main Point 2 / 舉一個例子來說明要點 2 的重要性). Therefore, we should (suggest an action people should take regarding the topic and Main Point 2 / 建議人們針對該主題和要點 2 採取的行動). Clearly, (Main Point 2) is closely linked to (TOPIC).

A third important point to consider in relation to (Topic) is (Main Point 3). There are several reasons for this. First, (the 1st reason Main Point 3 is important / 要點 3 很重要的第一個原因). Second, (the second reason Main Point 3 is important  / 要點 3 很重要的第二個原因). A good example is (an example that demonstrates the importance of Main Point 3 in relation to the topic/ 舉例說明要點 3 與主題的重要性). Therefore, we should (suggest what people should do in consideration of Main Point 3 / 建議人們根據要點 3 應該做什麼). As you can see, (Main Point 3) plays a key role in (Topic).

In conclusion, (Main Point 1), (Main Point 2), and (Main Point 3) are all important to understanding (Topic). Each point shows  us a different way that (Topic)  affects our lives. To better understand and deal with (Topic), we need to (say what we need to do to to better understand and deal with this topic / 說說我們需要做什麼才能更好地理解和處理這個話題). Personally, I believe (state your final opinion about the topic / 陳述你對這個主題的最終看法). The more we consider (Topic), the more successful our lives will be.